
THE HIDDEN MAN by David Ellis
Putnam Adult, September 3, 2009, 336 pages
The Hidden Man appears to be the first in a new series featuring Jason Kolarich. Jason is a defense attorney in a fictitious city in the Midwest – i.e. much like Scott Turow’s books and intentional or not, just one of many similarities Ellis’ writing has with that author’s. After a brief moment in the legal spot-light defending a politician, Jason suffered a devastating personal tragedy, quit his high-profile job, curled up in a ball and as the book opens is now tentatively re-entering the world. He has his own private practice and his newest client is a childhood buddy accused of murder.
Here’s the good news/bad news. The underlying story-line, with both its layers and twists and turns, is very engaging. The murder case and Jason’s buddy/client are not what they first appear to be. There is much more to the story – which dredges up Jason’s past – and which the author does a very good job in telling. And as the tale unfolds, several sub-plots all tie together in the end to make for a pretty good conclusion.
The bad news is Jason as a protagonist. He’s portrayed as a cross between Bruce Willis and Woody Allen. One moment he’s a wise-cracking, take charge of the situation type of guy and in the next he’s a self-flagellating, poor me wimp. This makes for some credibility problems. When Jason does break out of his self-imposed funk with some clear thinking and quick action, it’s jarring.
As alluded to above, Jason suffered an horrendous personal tragedy “prior” to the story here. The reader learns the details as we get inside Jason’s head as he relives it - constantly. At first this reader was sympathetic but due to the sheer repetition it becomes tiresome. Combine this with Jason’s guilt concerning his buddy/client, and the reminiscing becomes aggravating, detracting from the storyline. I got it, Jason is a tortured soul, let’s move on.
Also there are some spectacular editing errors. The most glaring, an infant daughter of Jason’s appears on page 230 – out of nowhere and never to be heard of again.
I’ve read several of this author’s earlier books. His first, Line of Vision, is excellent, with a great plot – much like this book – and a streamlined narrative. But Ellis’ subsequent books foreshadowed the problems here, a tendency to overwrite.
Not a bad book, but just okay. I wouldn’t rush out to buy it.